World rules
The Bottle Imp · Robert Louis StevensonThe cheaper the miracle, the harder it is to pass on
Keep a powerful solution from removing suspense: each successful transfer should leave its next owner fewer ways to escape the cost.
The pleasant surface does not explain who keeps the world running
Reveal a strange society through discoveries that force the visitor to change both their explanation and their plans.
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The Time Machine · H. G. Wells
The Time Machine: Sections 6 and 8–10, successive explanations of the Eloi and Morlocks.
The situation
The Time Traveller observes the apparently carefree Eloi and tries to explain their society using his own expectations about progress, labor and comfort.
What the source describes
He first treats the surface world as an achieved social harmony. Underground machinery, Morlocks and the Eloi’s fear of darkness force him to revise his account of who supports and controls whom.
How the choices connect
- Visible comfort suggests one account of how the society works.
- A neglected dependency introduces evidence that account cannot explain.
- The traveler revises his model and must revise how he intends to stay safe.
Watch for…
The Traveller reconstructs a speculative history; the novel does not independently verify every claim he makes about evolution or class. Preserve the distinction between observation and hypothesis.
Read the source passages
Sections 6 and 8–10, successive explanations of the Eloi and Morlocks. ↗
Selected passages: Sections 6 and 8–10, successive explanations of the Eloi and Morlocks.
How this moves the story
The Traveller's first account of the Eloi fits what is easy to see. Underground machinery and fear of darkness expose things it cannot explain. Each new observation makes a former expectation unsafe or incomplete. His account remains an interpretation, including speculative claims about history and class.
Try it in your story
Write the visitor's first practical prediction about the setting. Choose a hidden dependency that makes that prediction fail. Show the failed expectation in action, then let the visitor revise a plan and ask a better question. Keep what they observe separate from the history they infer.
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